Show Me Where it Hurts - Comments, page 7

@lunareclipse10
i will update again as soon as i get maybe 5-10 comments or votes and feedback on the last two chapters! :)

You can't just leave it like that either!!!!! Oh my god I can't handle this! Holy shit. Harry or someone needs to just appear out of nowhere because I can't deal haha

OMG no please no no no no.
I'm so anxious and scared please update OMG I'm too anxious I can't cope please please update soon.
when are you updating? I'm sorry to annoy you. But OMG. I hope someone saves Annie!!

@Hkychk
it’s updated! hah

No no no no no no no no!!!!! How the hell is he out?! You can't leave us hanging like this!!! Please update soon

OMG OMG HOW COULD YOU STOP AT THIS CLIFFHANGER OMG SO MUCH SUSPENSE OMG PLEASE UPDATE GAAAAH
IM ACTUALLY GOING CRAZY!!

YAY YOU UPDATED :)) I think that something is going to happen with dot. I think she has another secret motive besides just being a journalist.

That damn Dot...I knew she was shady. Once again Annie gets bit in the ass for being to trusting. I understand that she's young, but at this point after being in that celebrity world for as long as she has, she should be able to sniff out a rat before they open their mouth.
I'm not too sure if she's safe in HC esp w/ the paps knowing where they are. I feel a bit uneasy with her and the kids alone out there.

Plz subscribe to me plz and I love this story!!!!!!!!

sorry about the late update guys, i’m 1.5k in to a 2.5k essay which is due in tomorrow :( but then i have some free time :) so i’ll try to double update

I have a bad feeling about Dot...a very bad feeling about Dot. I'm glad that Annie and Harry worked things out. Due to the fact that they're still young they will tend to say things that they know for a fact will hurt the other- they haven't mastered the art of fighting fair yet.

I think that Dot woman is deffinetely working with someone.... I don't know what to do if she brings info to Will that she'll be alone in Holmes Chapel...

@Hkychk
thanks for the feedback! i’ll be updating again tomorrow.

I'm not really liking Dot at the moment. She rubs me the wrong way.

@Lady_A
thank you for always posting such detailed feedback, it’s so helpful! and exciting to read!

I agree that they need to compromise. Annie needs to remember that she was doing the same job (touring, away from family etc all the time) when she met Harry, and that’s when she fell for him most. It’s what he does.

Like I tried to show in this chapter, I think they both say things to get rises out of each other because at the end of the day, they’re still so young and maybe immature.

I feel like they both overreact. But harry should realize he should be there for his family. And he needs to realize that with Annie helping that charity it's gonna help her.

This is a tough one b/c I can see both Annie and Harry's points of view. Harry at this point shouldn't be surprised at Annie's reaction anytime he says he's staying in LA w/o her and the kids; he's given her reasons to feel that way so saying she's "torturing herself" whenever she thinks of the whole Kendall thing was wrong on his part. He was also wrong to say that Annie was "attention seeking" in terms of her dealing w/ that charity. For Annie that's her way of healing and he should not only respect that, but also be proud of her for even sharing her story.
As for Annie, she has to understand that Harry loves what he does. It's as if she thought he would stop making music once the group was finished. Also Annie can't have it both ways: one minute she's mad that he's not there enough, but then calls him controlling.

I was thinking maybe Harry and Annie could compromise: can't John Legend come to London to write w/ Harry? That way he's doing what he loves and Annie would feel better knowing he's home in London w/ her and the kids. I really think that they don't know how to compromise.

Can't wait for today's update :3

Glad they all decided to leave...Will is capable of anything, so they'd better watch out for any weirdness.

Yay ! They all left like I predicted...I hope Will is done for good but if he popped again...I wouldnt be surprised he is crazy.
Good Harry!!

Great story! Xx