Show Me Where it Hurts - Comments, page 5

Amazing :D please update soon :) x

@AEW_19
So do I! I've become so restless now! I NEED to know that Annie gets saved. Somethjng tells me that it'll be louis. Ugh gaaaaah. For gods sake. :@
who do you think it will be?!

@lunareclipse10
I always knew Dot was shady and connected to Will in someway. I really want to know what happened!

@AEW_19
I bet it was Dot who bailed him! Urghhhhhh.
I'm so sad and frustrated!! I really wanna know whether they made itor not :(

Are you writing a third book?! & no she can't die :( I hope she doesn't.

Omg.. literally crying!!

I meant will not liam lol

I'm not saying she should die but......if she did would we get a third book about life with harry struggling to raise ivy and Noah after killing Liam and just the mourning process and moving on of her death ?? If not,then please don't kill her !!! Great chappie...question:why didn't she just take everything and everyone and get in the car and drive far far away??....maybe go to the police station and ask them to track her phone so they could find Will and put him on death row...anyway read my story please :) it's called test drive

Holy shit!!!!!! Thank god for Eleanor but holy shit he stabbed her!!!! I need the next update like now!!

I can't believe he stabbed her!!!!

holy shit. omg please dont let her die :( theyre finally like stabling out and happy and if she dies i will literally flip my shit. i just want a happy endinggg :( pleeeease

@Icecle123
Thanks for clarifying that for me...that bit of info makes the latest update even more frightening.

@AEW_19
Eleanor left her house (or wherever she came from) and forgot her phone there.

Oh my god this was insane! As much as I hate seeing people and in this case, Annie, get hurt...I loved it because it was so dramatic and "edge of your seat" kind of thing. Although I am upset that you're going to end the story because I feel like I've been so involved in it and I feel like It's so realistic and amazing, I hope that maybe you'll do other stories because you're such a talented writer!

I just thought of something: Eleanor doesn't have her phone with her? They could have called the police while they were still locked in the room.

@lunareclipse10
I'm scared for everyone involved. Will is a sick bastard. I don't know how he was even allowed to get near Annie and the kids.

Please comment guys....I NEED to know what happens- these cliffhangers are killing me!!!

OMG! Don't let Annie die! Harry is going to be destroyed by this! I wish Eleanor bludgeoned Will. This guy is a psycho. When Annie survives this (and she will), I'm sure Harry will think twice about leaving her and kids alone like that.
Harry already felt guilty about not protecting Annie before- he's going to be gutted by these recent turn of events. These two need a happy ending- they've been through so much that they HAVE to get through this!!!

I am still shaking!!! Oh gooooooooodddddd!
guys please comment and feedback so we can see the new chapters'!!!

I actually got goosebumps when I saw the notification about the update.
WOW. I can't just wow. No!! This worries me so much! El is pregnant as well:( I'm actually on the verge of tears...this is too emotional! I can't even...
please don't let Annie or El die. Or Harry for that matter. Please tell me that louis barges in cause he's worried about El or something. I love how realistic your story is..it feels natural and it captivates me and I'm completely lost in the story when I read it. I'm so shocked. I feel shell shocked almost- I know I'm being really dramatic but I can't help it. Aw, are you ending the book after three chapters? Are you gonna continue with the story or...? I really hope this isn't the end for Annie and Harry. I love their story. Their admirable, really. Urgh, I just hope they both make it..alive. Annie. Omg, what about ivy?! Aw I'm so worried about them! Please update soon!