The Fire in His Eyes - Comments, page 3

So I re read the prologue and I got really sad! Please tell me you don't kill him :(

@Candy_Monster
ya, i felt bad for leaving you guys hanging for so long.

Thank you for making the chapter longer .

My hero is my sister and I know that sounds so stupid but it's because she has had so much happen to her in her life like she's tried to commit suicde and it worked. I miss her so much now it's only me and my dad and my cancer. Sorry I got carried away anyway update please

My hero is my best friend Imogen. She has been through so much.. She lost her dad when she was 10 and she had to mature a lot for her age. She is the once person that keeps me grounded and make me feel good about myself <3

PS: when he talked about is bad Yoda impression i just about pissed my self from laughing so hard :D

My hero(s) are Liam Zayn Niall Harry and Louis. They're like, EVERYONE'S HERO!!!! Well, not those crazy stupid ass retarted peices of shit directionators. Haha. Like, for example, My Friend hates one direction. AND SHE'S A GIRL!!!!! And my best friend Cody, he's a boy btw, LOVES one direction. I seriously think he's gay. He always says, "ILL KILL ANYONE WHO HATES NIALL!" Those were his exact words. I was all like *cough*GAY*cough*. He's always like, "HEY! I'M NOT GAY!" Even though it's pretty obvious he is. Well, anyways, back to the point. So, Liam Niall Harry Zayn and Louis are my hero's because they write songs from their heart. Unlike kesha. Timber is pretty good though, but it is not from her heart! I wro-well, I thought of a song before but I forgot it. It was about friends though! God, I've been writing this for about a half an hour now. God, I just go in to random subjects when I'm talking all the time. Weird. Haha. So bye now!!!!! =D

~Naomi

My hero is me because everyone else is a fucking bitch or a retarded fake ass slut. Or my 5th grade teacher. She was so fucking awesome.

@imustbeallie
Ya i'm soooooo sorry about the wait, iv'e been super busy with school and soccer and memorizing 21 different songs for a bunch of different things, so everything's a little hectic at the moment. I am writing the next chapter right now and it will either be up later tonight or tomorrow. Sorry again!

you gotta update !! your killing me!

Hahaha nice!!!

@imustbeallie

Sometimes I throw My Spanish in the air saying AYYYOO NO COMPRENDO !! I suck at Spanish so yeah xD

@Liam's Girl
hahaha ok :)

Eh i suck at both so whatever

Eh i suck at both so whatever

@Liam's Girl
Thanks :) ya i'm not the best at French, I'm better with Spanish haha.

You can just say desolé instead of je suis desolè

Idk yet but it will be soon, I promise :)

@Zaynlove
When are you updating? You're killing me! Lol

@Kay_Baby
No problem :)

@Zaynlove
Thanks :) I'll take everything into consideration XD