The Fire in His Eyes - Comments, page 2

And also, UPDATE PLEASE!!!!! :)

I would probably read a real book. But if I didn't have one, I WOULD FLIP OUT! I would flip my desk over, smash a t.v., punch walls, possibly kill someone, and run out into the woods and rip up a bunch of trees. Yea. I would seriously do that. I would smash fruit too. But I'll go home and watch spongebob on my possible smased t.v.. And also, I would probably through my cat across the room. :)

@imustbeallie

just updated. Sorry about the wait, my wifi got knocked out because all of the snow storms. :P

Updateeeeee pleaseeeee :)

@Liam's Girl
YAY!!!!!

I fucking love it. It is so cool. i honestly like this one soooooooo much better.

@imustbeallie
ya I know, but i'm really picky when it comes to my writing haha

I think you are doing perfect right now ! One thing have you ever thought of getting a co-author to help you ? Like you said early you have so much going on, Maybe it would help you get the story going more ?

@Liam's Girl
yea I did :) and thanks so much, I will be sure to apply those tips in my future chapters. :)

I noticed you took my advice and made her friends call her eva instead of Alyeabah or however you spell it. It is a bit all over the place but a good plot. I see a ton of potential as the story progresses. Sometimes it is hard to follow so try to use more spacing and not rush into things. It is greta so far and love it <3

@Niall ate my sandwich
awww thanks so much! means a lot

It's bomb .com!

@imustbeallie
hahaha sorry

Damn I thought you updated so I started squealing but you didn't :(

@Zaynlove
Haha

@Mrs. Storplikson
ya i accidentally deleted it so I had to re-upload it oops :/

What? Did you delete the chapter by accident and rewrite it again? Cuz I'm all like, 'WTF? IT JUST SAID SHE UPDATED AND NOW IT ONLY HAS THAT ONE CHAPTER FROM YESTERDAY!!!' Now I get. Pffffff.

@imustbeallie
;) sowwy

@Zaynlove

your so mean to me !!!

@imustbeallie
I can't tell you that, it would ruin the surprise. ;)