The Fire in His Eyes - Comments, page 4

@Kay_Baby
Hey! I just read Embarcadero an I like it, it's good so far. The only things that would make it even better is if you added more thoughts and details about what everyone is thinking because sometimes it can feel like the entire chapter is just dialogue. I think the idea is really cool and I loved jumanji or however you spell it. Other than that it's really god so far! You have gained a subscriber :)

No!! Even though I'm homeschooled I have to go on campus tomorrow. I'm not ready to have to deal with ratchet ass teachers! And don't get me started on the people that have to walk as slow as fucking possible in the hallways.

I am definitely excited to go back to school! Normally, everything people would say would piss me off and I'd be all "why are you even talking" in my head and just walk around blasting 1D in my headphones but I just transferred to the school where my crush goes and he's the sweetest and he even wrote me a song <3 sooo yeah... wow. That's a lot. I sound a little crazy. Lol

Can you read my story Embarcadero for me? I know you don't do reviews but you've become one of my favorite authors and I would just love it if you could let me know if it's any good? By the way, this is amazing. I'm already hooked.

http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/30348/Embarcadero/

Hell no i'm not fucking ready for school school can kiss my fatass cause its a bitch I hate my teaches and everything about school!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

@directioner9
sounds like a blast!!!

@imustbeallie
ahahaha I know how you feel! lol

Isn't it obvious? I'm gonna PARTY!! I'm definitely going to count down the seconds until midnight and maybe get that kiss?? HAHA! I'm a little rebel :)

omg my New years is going to suck this year. Because normally I would go out to the desert and light of fireworks and have marshmallow fight and watch my relatives get Pissed( drunk) and have a good time. But NO, I have to stay home and write my "New years resolution" like every time I write one I break it the next day. Like I always write not to fight with my brother but NOO him and I usually go like 3 days before he is pushing me and I'm slapping.. Omg that turned into a rant..

@Jen Storm
ikr!! haha

@Zaynlove
A6! That's so crazy that we are going to the same show!!! ahhhh :))

@Jen Storm
115 WHAT ABOUT YOU??

115 what about you?

What section are you sitting in??

@Jen Storm
AWESOME!

@Zaynlove
me as well!! :)

@Jen Storm
woah!!! awesome saturday or sunday?? I have saturday.

I love this story! So good and interesting!!
I too got tickets to WWAT for Chicago! eeek! :)

@That'srightI'mThia!
HAHA try learning about Kansas history. Now that's a snooze fest

TX.History! Ugh....Welcome to boretown population every texan.