Beautiful Monster - Comments, page 15

Okay so im new to this and I was just wondering if you could help me with a story like this one but not coping because I want to right my first story I just need help so will you help me ?

Can't wait to see what happens my favorite story

Please update I want to know what happens next

@hazzahstyles19

KK

@Skylar Styles
It's okay lol I get like that some times on my favorite stories too :) just try to reign it in a little bit, yeah??

@hazzahstyles19

Yeah sorry about the long comments, that I went a little over board with.... But I just share what's on my mind.

@Skylar Styles
We want your opinion on the story just not so…. demanding, I think I would call it. We love love love that you are so into our story and don't want to see us mess it up. I didn't mean to sound so rude in my other message, we definitely want you to continue to comment!!! We love hearing new things about the story, just not so many in a whole page from one person. Just a few at a time, babe, that's all we ask :) I liked what you had said I just didn't like that you leave extremely long comments on how we should do it. We love new ideas but not that many all at one time

@hazzahstyles19
Your welcome :)

@hazzahstyles19

I am sorry if it seems like I am telling you how to run your story, but all I'm trying to say is that your story is different in a good way and that I think you really shouldn't change it because the difference you have in it makes it stand out. So I'm sorry that you didn't like what I said, therefore I'll keep my opinions to myself from now on.

@niall's_babe
thanks!!

Omg I haven't read the story in such a long time since ive been so busy lately and your story is just soooo amazing please update soon I love this story and I'm dying to know what happens ^.^ :)

@Skylar Styles
Honey, I'm not trying to be a bitch but PLEASE stop telling us how to run OUR story :) If we decide that she has three babies and a rabbit then that's what will happen. We really appreciate your comments and your suggestions but that only goes so far. I'm sorry if this makes you mad or upsets you, but seriously. Stop with all the advice. We got this. We came up with this all on our own and we write it chapter by chapter. Nothing is for sure. She could end up with Harry but then again she could end up with one of the other boys. We haven't decided on anything, nothing is set in stone. When we need help with new ideas of the story or new events that should happen then we will ask. We really appreciate what you are trying to do, and we might even take a page out of your book. If that was just your opinion then there's a different way of phrasing other than using a bunch of "you shouldn't" and "you should"s in your "constructive criticism"…. We love that you are into the story and you don't want certain things to happen but know when to draw the line. Thank you :)


@onedindahouse

I hope she's pregnant it'll be a major plot twist

OMG!!!! I love this story so much it's the best one I have ever read and I think Amelia SHOULD NOT be pregnant that would just ruin very thing maybe she can get pregnant at the end of this story. Maybe when harry wakes up he can get mad and punch them (the boys because of Amelia) and then he thinks Amelia is pregnant (and yeah... I don't know what he will do if he thinks she is but finally that was just a normal throw up (that means she is not pregnant Jesus Christ! That would be so boring and it would ruin the whole story)

i agree, she shouldnt be pregnant! it would definitely ruin the story :/ this isnt the kind of plot that wouldnt go well with a baby in my opinion.

just amelia and the boys! (:

I think she should not be pregnant. That would like fuck up the story, because as of right now you're story is different and I like different and every time there is a kidnap story the girl get's pregnant.

OHHHHHHHHHH SHITTTT I think she's PREGNANT omg

@Alexandra Cazares
Most likely Niall the others haven't had sex/raped her and louis came on her stomach I don't think Ni used a condom IDK makes sense (Don't question my logic)

I think she's pregnant and Haz is gonna fucking kill somebody Harry is maybe gonna talk to her and she's gonna get some kind of explanation from Harry then he's gonna realize that's she pregnant or something and they are gonna get an abortion form a friend or something then Hazza is gonna kill somebody :)

Oh Harry is gonna lose his mind if she is pregnant!! I am not too sure how the other boys will react, but I am guessing they are not going to be 'happy dads to be' since it is sorta a toss up of who the actual father is.