Beautiful Monster - Comments, page 14

Nooooo Ugh Stupid zayn ugh stupid boys keeping there stuff why nasty -.- But omg shes pregnant :( ugh I feel sorry for the new girl -.- :'(

@onedindahouse
More like shock at the end of the chapter when it ends with Louis getting in an accident

@Feliciamendez1
I can't tell if that's a good thing or a bad thing :p

Woah was not expecting that

@Taijah Elizares
lol Karma's a bitch

@hazzahstyles19
Yeah its one of them stories where im like noooo but wellll karma gotcha back sooo im tongue tied here

@Taijah Elizares
lol I'm right there with you

Louis was kinda friendly therfore Im like awwe nooo :( but like I m like welll you did hold her captive

@louislove123
Why would Amelia black out and randomly go into a coma at the hospital?

OMG poor louis you should like have Amelia black out and itno a coma at the hospital pleas do that oh and try to updated again love it :)

@louislove123
Yeah oki! And i'm writing it now! It will be up soon!

I can't start it today or Tuesday because Tuesday my BD ANDTODAY HAVE LOT OF HOME WORK SO ILL TRY WENSDAY BUT NO PROMISES OH I THOIGHT YOU WERE GOING TO UPDATED TODAY'S

I just send you a message @onedindahouse :) tell me what you think of the idea :)

@louislove123
Just put anything there like hey or something haha :p

@onedindahouse
what does it mean by tittle on the messages is it tittle of story. Or somesomething else because is says you have to fill in the hole file im sorry it just im new here :)

@louislove123
Yeah oki just message me and i promise i'm gonna update soon! :)

Yaa thank you beacuse im not that good of writing storys like this but I would like to do a story like beautiful monster but different name for girl and setting but still be in a gang you know :) oh pleas updated to beafutuil monster and maybe the reason why louis is being so nice could be he want a kid ?

@louislove123
Awe! Yeah of course i'll help ya :)

Please updated oh im asking onedindahouse

@louislove123
which one are you asking hun??