Beautiful Monster - Comments, page 13

i really love yalls story! and just an idea maybe add a character picture for the new girl?
Please update ASAP

@jennifer lopez
There's actually two writers working on this story! Thank you for commenting and I hope you enjoy the upcoming chapters :)

hey im jennifer i just started reading fanfiction on this site and yours was the one that caught my attention. i started reading it and i love it . you are an amazing writer .please update soon. <3

update update update!! xx

noooo why did you leave it on a cliffhanger :(

shes so convinced that shes not pregnant so i feel like she actually is

I hopes she pregnant makes great drama

Ugh she is sooo pregnant.

@yours truly
I just told you that We were thankful for our fans and how many readers we have . -.-

@onedindahouse
That's all I wanted to hear haha! I just want to make sure that louislove123 wasn't by herself. Thank you for the fanfic and saying that its appreciated (: x

Woah ok I think we've all given our points across now so can we please just stop this? Both @hazzahstyles19 and I are grateful with how many readers and comments we have so what more can we ask for?

So lets stop this arguing now and move on :p

@hazzahstyles19
I understand where you're coming from but I seriously don't think she meant it rudely. You do a great job on this story and have so many readers and ofc you're proud. But she's just a fan of your fanfic. You might get lots saying 'should' but she obviously didn't mean it in a way that she's demanding you have to do it and have no choice but to use her ideas.

dont get all rude and make sarcastic comments on how she types. It could've been a typing error or other reasons. You're over reacting completely with how people phrase their sentences im sure she didn't mean that. It doesn't mean you have to use the ideas but they're just in love with this stpry as are a lot of people.

I don't tend to comment on how stories go because to be honest I'm crap with ideas and I think this story is great and imaginative. She meant no harm.

I love this story its intriguing and capturing so thank you for writing it. No one doesn't give you credit you're an amazing writer x

@louislove123 @yours truly

There is a huge difference between giving ideas and telling us what to do.

Example A: Telling us.
"You SHOULD make it to where this this and this happen."

Example B: Giving ideas
"I have a few ideas that could help ya'll out if you want to hear them."

Do you see the difference? I've tried being nice and explaining that there's a TOTALLY (that's how that is spelled by the way. Not tottaly) different way to give ideas rather than using the words YOU SHOULD. Skylar Styles, she has AMAZING ideas but she used you should and I told her as nice as I could to not use those words together in one comment and she apologized and understood where I was coming from. She has amazing ideas and I even used one of them. The difference between her ideas and @louislove123's ideas is that they made sense and could easily be slipped into the story and wouldn't end it so quickly.

Putting her into a random coma would take a lot of explaining. You don't just fall into a coma unless there is something seriously wrong with you in the medical area. What would be wrong with her? How would that have happened?

The boys don't keep medicine in the house, they take all precautions about over dosing and their play toys killing themselves. Why would they let her go just because she takes the medicine? Why would we kill off her mom? If anything, I'm sure she would rather live on her own rather than go back to a house full of boys who raped/ wants to rape her.

I rather be rude and get my point across rather than talk until I'm blue in the face on how you should word things. I am VERY thankful for all the comments we get on this story and I love love love that you all are so into the story but learn how to give ideas, not tell us what we should do. An yes, honey, I know I'm a bitch. You have no idea but you are working on it. I'm sorry if I'm being rude and BITCHY but hey. I'm tired of seeing "you should, you should, you should." It would be freaking fantastic to see "hey, I have a few ideas, would you like to see them?" THAT would just make my day. I thank my lucky stars everyday that we have so many readers and lovely people that comment. We definitely wouldn't be where we are right now if we didn't have them. But if you are going to give ideas, learn to GIVE them to us instead of basically demanding us to use them. I know it probably doesn't bother @onedindahouse but it's ticks me off to no end when I see a comment that says "you SHOULD." Now. That being said. I'm sorry if this upsets you but seeing things like that has ticked me off day after day after day. I hope you two enjoy the upcoming updates and have a super sparkly day :)

Thanks @yours truly I tottaly agree I mean were not taking away your storys were just giving you ideas what if you ran out of ideas because that happens alsot @ hazzahstyles 19 your kidna of being a bitch but we all love the story and were not taking it :/

@hazzahstyles19
I think you're rather rude. They're only trying to give ideas, they are not telling you how to run it. Be thankful you have comments and people are so interested. You could say it a lot nicer. I do love story though

@louislove123
okay, honey, i'm going to tell you like i told Skylar. Stop telling us how to run our story. thanks.

I can't I am crying

wow..
I didn't expect that to happen!
I cant believe they got a new toy..
please don't make harry do those 'things' to the new girl!!! OMFG :'(

Holy shit....

Oh you should do it wear she looks in a cabinet and finds druggeds or pills and then shebtrys too take them but harry gets to her and they relise they have to let her go then when she does she find out her mom dies and has nothing left but harry and the guys :)