Beautiful Monster - Comments, page 16

O god she can't be pregnant, I mean she can but..... The tricky question is - Who's the father???

Oh hell no she can't be pregnant!!! Take a test omg omg omg!!!

Pregnant alert ! Morning sickness raped or harry I know everything thats going down ....

@onedindahouse

Constructive critizim but you can't make her pregnant because as of right now, you're story is different. Any kidnap story I read, the girl get's pregnant and I think you shouldn't make her pregnant because that'll just ruin your unique story and it's original.

but she hasn't been raped since before she jumped off the roof. has she? her jumping would've most likely killed the baby. there's no way shes pregnant. right?

Oh god she's pregnant... Oh no oh no oh nooooo

SHE'S PREGO

@Skylar Styles
haha yeah she might be prego or might not. you won't know till the next chappie now ;)

its going to get cray if she is pregnat

@onedindahouse

If she was. As soon as vomit came up and the boys little discussion my mind snapped to that. But if she was.....

Woahhhhh it took me a minute to figure out that they were considering the possibility of her being pregnant ahaha

@Skylar Styles
Lol. Who said she was prego?

I'm telling you now ladies, you cannot what-so-fucking-ever make her pregnant. Would you like to know why? When they think she's pregnant they kill her, when she's pregnant the baby would die from the people hitting her on the outside. If she's pregnant the boys would have to take her to the hospital to let her give birth, they're cover.....blown....If she's pregnant who's the father? If she's pregnant, they will kill her and the baby. Why would they kill the baby? Well, a baby makes a lot of noise, you have diapers, food, baths, toys, clothes, beds, safe stuff. What does that cost? Money. And plus if the baby cries when El and Pez are over they want to know, and somebody will end up dead by the end of hour.
Now instead of her being pregnant- make her throw up because of the lack of food and water. Make her throw up because she is disgusted with the boys.
Now ideas for the story:
Out-bursts
Attempted escape
Rampages
Knifes being thrown
Self-Harm
Courage
Hatred
But most of all
Make a twist in the story, something that'll spice it up. Make a girl come to the house and be abused and used like Amelia, make them become friends, make them understand why they are here. But most importantly, make them change the rules of the house. They're in charge not the boys, they control everything. Just juice the story up.

I have been just as gullible as she in regards to what Harry said to her. I hope I am wrong! Can not wait to find out what happens!!

Ughhh I'm dying to know what happens!

#thunder #stolen

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!:) xx

@Skylar Styles
Welcome :)

@leahstyles35

Thanks

@Skylar Styles
LOL Yeah they are really good though