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Thank you! I will definitely read the link you sent, and fix up those errors, as it makes a little bit more sense! Thank you for your wonderful feedback!

dontjockmystyles
5/2/14

I'm so happy that you enjoy my story! There's Lots of surprises coming and I will be sure to fix the mistakes you pointed out the moment I get a chance! Thank you for your review and your time! xx. -Kay

Kay_Baby
4/28/14

Thank you so so much for your kind review, it made me truly happy! <3

TheKat
4/26/14

I was wondering, could you put my story Torn Away on the waiting list?

Shattered Porcelain
4/26/14

lets see if this will give you a link?
if not I guess I guess I have to go the stupid long way, I've been waiting patiently for a harsh critic to review my story, I don't care if it will help or not help my story, I just want to know the honest and brutal truth of how my story is going, that way I can better revise it and future stories. :)
My story is called I'm From One Direction Damn it! (In case that link didn't work)
here I'll paste it too, incase the link still doesn't want to work: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/13581/Im-From-One-Direction-Damn-It/
Anyways, thank you for your time!

bananabreeana
4/26/14

@ThatRandomUnicorn

I will sure make the corrections thanks for the input you are making me become a good writer thanks. :)

BritineylovesHarry @ HarryStylesFanfiction.com
4/22/14

Can you review my story? It is called The Cruise

TheyChoseMe
4/18/14

Can you review my story? Its called Friend Or Foe. Its quite different from the story's I've written so I wondered if I could have you're take on it?

Also I'm dyslexic so my spelling and grammar may be not that great in some places but also, Usually when a character is talking and maybe I miss a certain letter out of the word. That'll be deliberate because is shows the accent of the character more.

For example a character says "Coz or don know, or is, instead of his"

So "Is alright" She said.

Instead of "His alright"

That type of spelling will be on purpose...

So yeah, please review? :D

http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/41829/Friend-Or-Foe/

Piper charms
4/14/14

Can you please review my story 'Almost'? I just started today, and there's only two chapters. (P.S.:I might have grammar errors, so I know that, I ho back and read it over after four chapters. :D)

Thanks!! :D

Niall Is Awesome
4/12/14

Could you review my story Abhor? It's only two chapters. Would love your feedback on it.

dontjockmystyles
4/12/14

Could you review my story Midnight Memories Please?

http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/31847/Midnight-Memories/

Missesonedirection94
4/12/14

I love that you want to help people write even better stories, and I was wondering if you could read my story, Don't Burn Out, and tell me how I'm doing and what I need to fix. I would really appreciate the help!
http://www.harrystylesfanfiction.com/Story/35244/Dont-Burn-Out/