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~Prologue : All The Information~

Tick, Tock, the clock went as Crystal stared into the icey, cold and dead eyes of the main suspect of a cold-blooded murderer.

"I-I swear, I don't even know what your talking about," The man said, sweat dripping down his face as she looked deeper and deeper in his eyes - she could see he was hiding something and she knew he wouldn't get away with it. She'd seen every trick, every lie, and everything suspects have done to try to get away with the crime.

"Well, if you don't," Crystal started off, pacing back and forth on her side of the table before leaning down and folding her hands together before looking at him again, studying the features of his face, and his expression, said his one and only feeling right now: Nervousness

"Why are you the main suspect then, huh?" She asked him right before he looked down to the floor and glanced at her before answering again, he was trying now to look non-guilty, but his face looked nothing but it. Guilty was the only verdict that would ever make sense right now in this part of the case.

"I don't know, It's just a mis-"

"A big - Giant misunderstanding that the proof we have traced back to you, eh?" Crystal asked, clearly annoyed, starting to pace back and forth behind his back. Now, from where she was, she could see him clearer now. The suspect was shaking, shaking way more then earlier before when She was hammering him down with the easy questions, but these were now getting hard. He was fighting for his innocence, but Crystal, would not so easily grant him that. He was guilty, and she had proof.

"Harry, please come in here," She said after she pressed her finger onto a button so he - Harry - could could hear her. A minute passed by until he came here, and before he did, the suspect - guilty suspect and Crystal were having a dead-on staring contest. Neither of them would take our eyes off of each-other, but mostly because he didn't want to look so guilty, which is the way her would've looked if he looked away. He didn't know that Crystal already thinks him of being guilty. When Harry came in, Crystal was kind've glad because She wouldn't been able to hold out much longer with the staring contest - she was getting tired.

"Ask him the questions," Crystal said before turning around and then sitting back in her chair, folding her hands on the table once again before Harry started hammering the suspect down with questions. Just as they will in court, Crystal thought, looking down but looking back up immediately when Harry started the questions.

"Do you know this girl?" He asked, holding up a photo so the suspect could see it. It was a middle-aged girl with blonde hair had brown eyes, smiling with her family around her, giving her hugs and greeting her.

"Uh," was all he said as soon as he looked down then continued with, "I don't know her."

"Really," Harry said before he glared at the suspect once more before closing his eyes and thinking before talking again.

"Then you might know this girl," he said while holding up yet another photo. A photo with the same woman, but dead. The suspect - Mr. Park - just looked down and shook his head as a reply.
"Then why did you propose to her not so long ago?" He asked before the Parks's eyes widened open like he was surprised and managed to spit out a "W-What?!"
"That's right," Harry replied, feeling confident while crossing his arms across his chest, staring at the suspect bluntly with no feeling at all, none what-so-ever.
"So don't even fake it," Crystal said before Harry glared at her which made her make a face that said, Too much?

"I-I-I-" The suspect stuttered out as he looked down, shaking even more then he was when Crystal was in the room alone with him. And by the look on his face, he knew that there was no one in that very room that found him innocent. He had no choice but to tell the truth. Maybe.

"Okay, I did know her, but I swear, I didn't murder her!" he exclaimed as he put his hands up in defeat.

"Then why did you deny knowing her at all?" Harry shot back, staring at the suspect again while writing things down on his notepad. He was good, even though he just started this job about five months ago. But he'd also got enough information to solve three murders.

"I just didn't want to get deeper into trouble," He replied as he rested his back into his chair, crossing his arms like Harry was doing, as if he was making a signal that said, 'Two can play at that game'.

"Who said you were in trouble?" Harry asked, plopping his hands down by his sides. He wasn't to fond on the fact someone was copying him. Escpecially a suspect. But when he said that, though, the suspect immedietly sky-rocketed from his seat and leaned forward, no longer looking calm, but worried and nervous, once again. He started sweating, then playing with his hands as his eyes darted around the room.

"Uh, Uh," he said, trying to think of a good excuse so he wouldn't get into trouble.

"Look, I don't want to be so harsh on you," Harry said before glancing at Crystal, then she noticed what he was trying to do.

"You don't want to be so harsh? Your supposed to be harsh on a guilty person!" She blurted out, hopping up from her seat before putting her hands on her hips and glaring at Harry. They were playing 'Good Cop Bad Cop', and they've done it before. It was as if they'd been doing it for their whole life.

"This doesn't mean he's guilty! We don't have enough proof," he shot back, glaring at the suspect.

"You are innocent, right?" He asked, leaning towards the suspect. The suspect looked down and twiddled his thumbs once more before saying:

"Yeah, I'm innocent." For Crystal and Harry, that's all the information they had needed.


"Wow, what a day, and what a belligerent, un-cooporitave man that was," Crystal said as she shook her head, walking with Harry to the nearby Perkins where they usually ate for lunch on their brake.

"I know, he isn't even a good actor, but that was only two people," Harry said before making a right, five more blocks to Perkins.

"Yeah, hopefully we wont have to call in Louis. Niall found too much proof on the victim's body that Louis will be worse on that guy then we were," Crystal mumbled while opening the door to Perkins.

"Hopefully, but we'll find out in court next week," he said, waiting for a waiter or a waitress to get us seats.

"Yeah, hopefully," Crystal said before she looked down and moved her legs a bit.

"Do you feel that?" Crystal asked before looking back up at Harry, studying his face a bit as it became puzzled.

"Feel what?"
"It's like someone's watching us," she said before turning back to her shoes, as if she found them so interesting she couldn't keep her eyes off of them for a minute. But as soon as a waitress came, she looked behind her, only to see someone hiding - not well - behind a plant. As soon as she saw that, she hurried up to Harry right away.
What is going on? She thought to herself as she sat down. When she looked back if that person was still there, the person was gone.

He saw me, she thought, making a new vow to herself. She would find out why that person was watching her.

Notes

How did you like the first chapter?

Comment below, thanks for reading ;)

I tried to make this as original as possible!

Unless this is un-original...

//I'vebeengonetoolong

Comments

@katy7629 Actually I took a break from this site :')
I'll be updating this soon!

@Audrey
I'll update sometime this week if I find free time between classes >.<<br>

UniqueMOFO UniqueMOFO
9/17/14

I feel like everyone on this site died, or forgot bout it's existence...
No one has updated in months, am I missing out on something?

katy7629 katy7629
9/16/14

I really want to read more of this love xo

Ohsugarbitch! Ohsugarbitch!
5/3/14

@Meeee X Harry

Oh my gosh, thank you!
You play MCL? AWEEEESOME~
What's your username?

@LissieMissie

Thank you~^^
I know what stuff is original and what isn't, so I tried to make this as original as possible~
Thank you~!

@ourboysRthebest

Thank you so much!
Yeah, this isn't going to revolve around love so much. It's rated R for REALLY long chapters ;o
No, I'm kidding, just for bloody scenes, murder, graphical detail, and much more :)
If this actually gets popular, I just might throw in a few love scenes just for you guys ^^


@Hopeless Directioner

Oh my gosh, thank you so much for your kind words!
I've wanted to be a detective for a while now - along side a lawyer or a doctor - so when I thought about it for a little longer, I was like:

"HEY! This site needs more original stories! I'll make one!"

Because last time I was on here, I KNOW there was nothing like this. So posting this was kinda a shot in the dark, but I now know that it was worth posting it~^^

UniqueMOFO UniqueMOFO
4/11/14

Talk about original, I love this! It's so hard to find something someone else has never done, but you found it, and it's awesome!