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@katy7629 Actually I took a break from this site :')
I'll be updating this soon!

@Audrey
I'll update sometime this week if I find free time between classes >.<<br>

I feel like everyone on this site died, or forgot bout it's existence...
No one has updated in months, am I missing out on something?

I really want to read more of this love xo

@Meeee X Harry

Oh my gosh, thank you!
You play MCL? AWEEEESOME~
What's your username?

@LissieMissie

Thank you~^^
I know what stuff is original and what isn't, so I tried to make this as original as possible~
Thank you~!

@ourboysRthebest

Thank you so much!
Yeah, this isn't going to revolve around love so much. It's rated R for REALLY long chapters ;o
No, I'm kidding, just for bloody scenes, murder, graphical detail, and much more :)
If this actually gets popular, I just might throw in a few love scenes just for you guys ^^


@Hopeless Directioner

Oh my gosh, thank you so much for your kind words!
I've wanted to be a detective for a while now - along side a lawyer or a doctor - so when I thought about it for a little longer, I was like:

"HEY! This site needs more original stories! I'll make one!"

Because last time I was on here, I KNOW there was nothing like this. So posting this was kinda a shot in the dark, but I now know that it was worth posting it~^^

Talk about original, I love this! It's so hard to find something someone else has never done, but you found it, and it's awesome!

Wow this is so different from most of the stuff on here, I love it! I love the romance genre but it's refreshing to see a story that does not revolve around love. I subscribed! Can't wait for the next update!

It's so awesome! It's so cool how their cops, and how she's not like all the others. I really love this so far, and can't wait for more!

Honestly, I freaking love this so far.
It's very interesting, I don't think I've seen a story like this so far.
Minor grammar mistakes, but I know you have dyslexia, so don't sweat it.
I've read this story on MCL, and It's even better on here

@UniqueMOFO
You're welcome [: x

@punkrockshow

It's only long since It's descriptive. Instead of making my chapters like:

The sunset was very beautiful

I try to make it like:

The sunset was gorgeously bright. It was a clash of red and pink, as if nature was sending off the day and calling for night with its own set of perfect fireworks.

If you know what I mean~^^

Thanks for reading, anyway~^^

@UniqueMOFO
I don't necessarily think you need long chapters, just enough to get the story to where it needs to be otherwise they become a bit of an overkill for the reader. Just my two cents though, i look forward to reading the next chapter.

@punkrockshow


Thank you~

I have chapter one written out already, and that's WAY more descriptive then the prologue - which I know I didn't describe it to make it so realistic.

All of my chapters will be really long, and It'll reveal more and more about the characters (and the new ones) as it goes along. I try to make my chapters a 8,000 character mininum~!

I like it; it's sort like the movie Seven meets CSI. I'd describe things a little more though if I were you - I've got a bit of a vivid imagination so I could put the characters into a perfect setting inside my head but it'd be nice if you did it through your writing instead [: