Fanfiction 101 - Comments, page 12

@ANormalGirl
Thank you for the suggestions! I will definitely take note of these when I start back up on reviews. I'd be happy review your story again, so I'll add that to my list(not on the chapter otherwise it gets stuck and logs me out but my word document with the list). :)

I think you should try to give more advice on how to fix the mistake the author makes, pointing out mistakes is fine since that's what the author wants to know but maybe don't point out too many mistakes, just the most common ones they have. Maybe give advice on how they can make their story better and what to do to attract more viewers. I also think linking the stories would be good. There's not much to change about your reviews since you already have been doing such a great job! Can't wait till you update Love At First Type. :D

Also I was wondering if you could review my story Sweet Disaster again? I have more chapters up so when you're not busy could you review it again? :O

I think you should try to give more advice on how to fix the mistake the author makes, pointing out mistakes is fine since that's what the author wants to know but maybe don't point out too many mistakes, just the most common ones they have. Maybe give advice on how they can make their story better and what to do to attract more viewers. I also think linking the stories would be good. There's not much to change about your reviews since you already have been doing such a great job! Can't wait till you update Love At First Type. :D

Also I was wondering if you could review my story Sweet Disaster again? I have more chapters up so when you're not busy could you review it again? :O

@I AM CRYSTAL MALIK
Read Chapter 32 :)

Hi could you do a chapter about how to add pictures to chapters i know how to link but not add pictures
thank you.

~crystal

hey, I know you reviewed my story a while ago, but I only had about 3 chapters then. Could you review The Fire in His Eyes again, since I have more chapters now??

Secret admirer plz I couldn't link it sorry

Secret admirer plz I couldn't link it sorry

Kk thank u for the constructed criticism!

Hey, can you please read my story Simon's Daughters.
I am going to warn you now, I'm am no good with grammar and spelling. I do change P.O.Vs a lot. I've been told the beginning isn't good, but the rest of the story I've been told is.
Link < just in case that didn't work http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/24947/Simons-Daughters/

Hello, can you please review my story Durban skies?

http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/32327/-D-U-R-B-A-N-S-K-I-E-S-A-Larry-Stylinson-Fanfiction/

hi can you review my story, please, Not That Much Of A Fan, when you can?

Although you're not updating right now, can you do my story, Demented whenever you can?

Hi can you please review and rate The mentally brave?
Thank you =)

Hi! Can you review my story I survived with 1D? Thanks! Take as much time as you need!

Can you make a chapter with some tips on becoming a better writer? More than just the basics, you know grammer, format, description, those are the basics

Well, since you seem to not have any reviews on your waiting list..... you must review Chasing Angels. I've decided for you.

Thanks for the review. <3 I have 2 more chapters up now. :)

They don't think of themselves as a 'gang'. That's why they are so different. And I got the same comment about the burning, I really don't know why I put that there. It just made sence to me that they raid then burn. Thanks for the review!