Those Totally Dumb FanFic Moments [Editing] - Comments, page 9

I hate it when you read a story and the girl is dirt poor, abused, and lives in the worst house ever; but the you click on the polyvore links and they are wearing brand name clothes, expensive makeup, and the best shoes

what?

@One direction. 'Nuff said
Hahaha, really? oh god.

@JustKeepSwimmingStyles
oh my gosh, I can testify to the power of sleep. My goodness. I got home from school yesterday, felt like crap, and took a four hour nap. And then I woke up, took a shower, and went back to bed. I slept for almost half a freaking day.

no hw got done, but hey, I'm not sick anymore! SLEEP IS ANAZING

@zaynisthebestest
naw, thanks! and I did c:

Enjoy ur sleep ;)

Lol, you're funny when you're tired x3

I am seriously hating any Kylie right now. Extreme jealousy issues, No offence to any Kylie's out there.

I was reading Chapter 22, and I was like, "DOuble shot! SHoot them zombies twice! Gotta make sure them mofo's are dead!"

@emmaphants
thanks, I like you too, yay! lets be friends! c:

@WontStopTill1DStops
Haha. Me too

@forever_young1D
My god. If I had to deal with that, that much, I'd be insane by now.

@WontStopTill1DStops
Exactly, and I'm all like wtf?! I do not want to listen to people I know get it on in the room one door way away from mine. Either make the people have quiet sex or don't put them all in the same fucking hotel room.

@forever_young1D
Omfg HOLY SHIT!!!!!! That is so true!!!! ASDFGHJKL

@WontStopTill1DStops
I saw that I was like 'High Five to you even though you are some place in the world that I don't know...!' I also thought of another thing relating back to them all staying in that one big huge fucking hotel room, when one of them has sex or something and they are all like, I screamed Harry's name as I orgasmed, like why the fuck don't the other guys ask them to keep it down or something. If I had to listen to my friend and her boyfriend fuck eachother I would at least want them to keep it down

I really really REALLY hate it when girls are 19 or something, and they never seem to have their periods. I mean, these characters live with vampires or have sex every night, so there must be something medically wrong with them if they still haven't got their periods. Frankly, it's annoying and totally unrealistic, and for me, just spoils the entire story.

I hate it when the author takes like a whole paragraph just to describe the characters outfit when they end up just putting a polyvore link

Yay! I inspired a chapter! Same with forever_young1D!! Yay! And my fucking god, it's a real thing!

@forever_young1D
OMFG!!! You'll kill me of laughter!!!! Dear god! And I know right!!!! Can people just clean it up. Just a bit.

I hate it when people are doing their character summaries and they write every fact about them, but the facts don't make sense. Like:
"Is terrified of spiders| her parents ran away so she's raising $ to find| loves choco chi ice cream| her parents dead|"

Okay.... Um, use complete words or don't say them at all! And how the heck would she try to find her parents if they are dead? And you don't have to tell everything about the character in the summary! Let the reader find out more about them as the story goes on.

i also hate it when the author makes One Direction a bad ass gang , and then they name the gang One Direction . like sit in the corner and think about your life . does One Direction sound like a badass gang name to you ? c'mon . be a little more original .