Behind Closed Doors {Larry Stylinson} - Comments, page 2

Chapter 12 - I have to ask, do you write some of these scenes for dramatic effect or...? I don't want to sound negative and tell you that you are writing them OOC, if that was sort of the intention, especially considering that I do really, really love the story.

Chapter 11 - This was good, but honestly I liked the dirty talk better than the actual sex scene. That one was a little rushed this time around. Larry is soo hot! <3 (Although I do kind of hate Harry's hair right now. I mean he's still cute, but damn he needs a haircut. xD)

@onedirectioninthetardis
Ah, ok thanks, that makes a lot of sense. =]

@charlie2cute
Message me about betaing. It depends on how much time I have

@charlie2cute
Lol ok lots of comments. All I can say is that it's all fiction and in no way representing how I actually think things are... That goes for all of it. I believe in Larry but the details are unknown to all of us. As the first smut scene goes, that same sentence applies. The details I've added is for dramatic effect and to make a story. It's not my place to fictionally speculate within my work so I don't. The gifs and pics are a mix of fan art and lookalikes. I know that a lot of the pics and gifs are not louis and harry.

I love the story, but I think it is getting a little too girly at times. Still adore it though, keep up the good work!

Larry smut is the best! Who was Cara, btw?

I honestly thought it was cute. It maybe was a little dumb, but people in love do dumb stuff.

Also, I really doubt Harry is gay. I think he's bisexual (I think he was openly bi, before Modest came along) - he had an ex before X factor and they looked pretty happy to me. I think Louis might be gay. Even when he was with Hannah, he didn't look that in love. I think he really did like her and even loved her, I just don't think he was into her all that much.

Love it. I don't think that the management are that evil, I just think they are doing their jobs (which is to ensure 1D's popularity.)

Eleanor was probably hired by Modest! though and they are clearly twins if not triplets. By the way, is the pic in chapter 6 real?

The gif in chapter 5 - is that supossed to be Harry and Louis? That's not them, is it?

Ok, I realise these comments don't come up in the chapters that I'm posting it. So basically, I'm on chapter 4. Now, don't get me wrong, I love this chapter and I thought it was really hot, but umm, if I do have some constructive critisism - this (the first time) was a little too touchy-feely. First of all, I doubt boys will wait 6 months to do reach other, unless they literally had no alone time. But thats more of a nit-pick, basically what I wanted to say, is that this is way too emotional. Now, I'm not saying there won't be any emotions (obviously there will be - Harry & Louis love each other, I have no doubt about it), but boys are more about actions than words. I read a one shot between Cedric Diggory and Viktor Krum (Harry Potter) once which was Cedric's first time, but not Krum's. It was really hot, but it got rapey at times (it was written by a gay guy, I think). Basically what I'm saying is: the best first time fic would be somewhere between yours and that one. xD I did like it though.

By the way, is that gif at the end real? It looks a little fake to me.

This story is amazing! There's no way this is only the second thing you've ever written (or do you just mean the second 1D fanfic)? I still need to work on my sex scenes, would you beta me?

I love it, it was really well written and hot (even though it was just a kiss) - personally, I imagine things went a little bit diffrently (which you'll see when I do my own Larry fannfic), but I love it!

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Hey just know this is probably annoying but I'm a huge fan of your writing and was wondering if you could check out my story " Change My Mind" ??? Thanks love it would mean the world to me

plz plz plz start the sequel!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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@onedirectioninthetardis

YES YES YES !!!!!!!!!!