You Make it Real {A Harry Styles Fan Fiction} - Comments, page 18

@Nialleatworld
I know! He's awful!

@awaywithwords
Yeah! He needs some sort of restraint!

Oh my goodness! I really hope that pipers lawyer can prove it some how. James is so disgusting. At the least I hope they put him in a metal ward or something.

love. I cant believe James. I HATE HIM!

@onedirectioninthetardis

YES

@HappilyMe
Okay! I will check it out <3

YAY WE CAN BE BESTIES ;P

@onedirectioninthetardis

Thank you! Feel free to read my story. I would love to get your feedback on it! Have a good night!

PS- I LOVE DOCTOR WHO.

@HappilyMe
Thank you <3 Love your username ;)

love it!

@BritineylovesHarry
I'm done and it's posted. SO SORRY <3 Hope you enjoy!

done yet?????

@Paige_Styles
I've started writing it :) hoping to post it tonight.

Next chapter?

@onedirectioninthetardis
I agree, it is!

@BritineylovesHarry
I'll try soon!

@awaywithwords
That's so annoying! :(

@onedirectioninthetardis
No! :(

When is the new chapter coming, just wondering cause i really want to read more of the story

@BritineylovesHarry
Ohhhh! That's a good idea ;)

Hows the next chapter coming along i bet it is going to be super intense as the others. I have a idea for a chapter the one agenst piper and james make it switch between piper and james p.o.v i think it will be a awesome chapter ^_^

@awaywithwords
Hmmm. Guess we'll see ;) did your alert work this time, or no?

I really like this chapter. :)

a part of me feels like Karen almost feels guilty, like she's still talking to her boyfriend (ex?) and that maybe this while thing was his idea to get Karen to milk Harry for money and stuff. I feel like she almost agreed too quickly for it to be really what she wants to do.