You Make it Real {A Harry Styles Fan Fiction} - Comments, page 17

@HappilyMe
Thanks!! I'm glad you liked it!

@Anonymous25
Yes it's quite hot here haha. Thank you <3

@Orangeaiya
Yeah, it's really sad :( I'm lucky to have great parents, but that type of thing happens too often.

Wow Riley's parents are something else. My next door neighbor used to be like that to her kids but they were all raised tough so none of them cared. She used to buy them stuff for their love. It was weirdd.

I love your story! In the Netherlands it is cold actually, but not freezing yet. You live in Florida I guess? Keep writing, you are good at it!

LOVE THE UPDATE! Riley's parents are assholes. She did not deserved to be treated that way. I'm really glad Liam stood up for her and I'm really loving the progression in their relationship. And I also really loved the sex scene. Probably one of the best ones I've read yet. Thank you so much for te mention. <3

Yes!!!! James is going to jail!!! He deserves it!!!!!!

Ohhh God if Only James wasn't a sick bastard.....But yay for Justice!!!! Yay!!!!!!!!

@awaywithwords
It was quite creep writing from James' POV! haha!

Hmmmm we'll see ;)

So happy that James is going away!!!

It it was kinda creepy to read the story in James' POV.

I just hope hope everything between Harry and Piper continues to go smoothly, I have a feeling something is going to happen with Karen though :/

@BritineylovesHarry
Thanks :):)

yes! I've been reading it since she started it. She's great!

Omg lol just read it thx for putting me idea it turned out amazing hope you type mire chapters in the mean time I have been hooked up in L.A to London by awaywithwords lol thanks for you creative ness
P.S
Have you read L.A to London

@Orangeaiya
Thanks :)
yeah, she just has a big heart and when she was trying to get over it, her doctor told her to try to look at things from James pov and she realizes how crazy he is so it's kinda sad. But, don't worry she's not gonna keep feeling bad about it. She's just emotional in the moment haha

James is such a psycho. I can't believe that he thought he wasn't going to jail.
Good chapter. Somewhere in the story they or somebody should try to toughen Piper up. Not to where she's a bitch but when things like this happens she won't feel bad.

YES! FINALLY! Love this chapter, I am so glad he's gone now! Can't wait for the next chapter!

@You make it real
aww, thanks so much!!! I'm glad you enjoy it! Love your name ;P hehe

This story is AMAZING. Truly, so many plot twists, never a dull moment!

@BritineylovesHarry
Haha it's okay. And yes, part of the next chapter will be from James' POV. ;)

Thanks for updating :D pretty good so can you do my idea too??????? lol not try to demand but it will be interesting

@Orangeaiya
And yes, James is sick and disgusting. Awful human being

@Orangeaiya
Well there's always a chance for it to turn around. The jury hasn't met yet and the judge hasn't made any decisions. There just isn't hard biological proof.

Ugh. James is so disgusting. I hate how he managed to get his way with other girls without getting in jail. That's just some sick shit that he did to her.