
Critiques
Crossroads
·Title: Crossroads
·Author: CrumpetsAndTea
·Chapters: 6
·Band(s): 1D
·Rated: R
·Link: Crossroads
·Genres: Romance, Drama
Title: Crossroads
Author: CrumpetsAndTea
Book Link: Crossroads
Review;
Negative: The story is amazing without a doubt. It was real and honestly, I can’t hate on that fact because we need more reality than fairytales.
Positive: It is very realistic and true- of course it breaks my heart but the world NEEDS more of a reality check.
My opinion: I FUCKING LOVE ITTTTTT- I CAN’T EVEN EXPLAIN! I am DEFINITELY going to become a common reader (: You’re doing so amazing baby I fucking LOVE ITTTTTT
Rating: 9/10
Story Grammar: Very good- my grammar cop side was very pleased (((:
Story Flow: Very smooth. One thing I absolutely SUCK at is giving descriptions/filling in spaces with little details that complete the story; all of my stories seem too quick. But yours is PERFECT I am FUCKING JEALOUS UGHSGVUHSABWDI
Tips: Keep it flowing baby!!!
Recommendation: 10/10
Notes
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8/19/18