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Intoxicated

Form:
-Title: Intoxicated
-Author: cheskastyles
-Number of chapters: 12 (not complete)
-Band (One Direction or 5SOS): One Direction particularly Harry and Louis
-Content rating (G, PG, R, etc): NC-17
-Link: Intoxicated
-Genre(s): Romance, Drama, Tragedy

Title: Intoxicated
Author: cheskastyles
Book Link: Intoxicated
Review: SO um

First off- and I mean no offense to this but when I find a fanfiction that messes with my heart strings the only vocab that comes to mind are curse words.

FUCK YOU
FUCKKKK YOU

IM CRYING YOU ARE HURTING MY HEART WOMAN

I WISH I COULD PUT CRYING EMOJIS LIKE FUCK MY HEART.

God my heart hurts so fucking much

I'm done with life.
My Opinion: I love it- I honestly do.
Rating: 9/10
Story Grammar: Really good- simple 'you're' and 'too' and spelling incorrections (like the misconception of the difference of 'there' and their')
Story Flow: Good- some things happened a little too fast with me but overall it was great (((:
Tips: Just watch the 'you're' and spelling misconceptions (: if you ever need any help I can happily edit them for you (I wouldn't change the chapters, just the grammar errors).
Recommendation: 8/10
YOU MADE ME CRY

AND MY HEART HURTUGHGGGGASIUBFIUHOUWEDNKS

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Comments

Hey, love! Are you still doing these reviews?

twoghosts twoghosts
8/19/18

Title: Fallen Angel
Author: Prinny1321
Number of Chapters: 4 (currently)
Band: One Direction and 5SOS
Content Rating: NC17
Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/90916/Fallen-Angel/
Genres: Romance, Adventure and Fantasy

Prinny1321 Prinny1321
8/17/18

Title: Only You
Author: Prinny1321
Number of Chapters: 56 (currently)
Band: One Direction (Harry focused)
Content Rating: NC17
Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/90226/Only-You/
Genres: Romance, Comedy and Drama

Prinny1321 Prinny1321
8/17/18

-Title: // Denude //
-Author: PerciaxXXx
-Number of chapters: 5 (currently)
-Band (One Direction or 5SOS): Harry Styles
-Content rating (G, PG, R, etc): NC-17/ R
-Link: http://www.onedirectionfanfiction.org/Story/91100/Denude-Styles-Triplets-AU/
-Genre(s): Drama, Tragedy, Teen

PerciaxXXx PerciaxXXx
8/3/18

@harambejtrump
Once I get home from my vacation (around tomorrow evening, if not it’ll get started on Tuesday) I shall begin it!