Story Reviews
//We Took a Chance\\
Book title: We Took a Chance (chonce)
Author: MelissaStylesInStyle
Overall Story: The plot was so cool. Like it made me want to live abroad too :) I was super pleased with your grammar and spelling and you actually have decently lengthed chapters. Unlike legit almost everyone else on this site. The only flaw that I want to pick at is the way you made Niall seem like the victim in almost all the situations. It was something small but it made it seem like he was very delicate. Everything was beaut
My favorite things: Thankful for your proper spacing !! Remember kids, never drink or else you’ll get drunk and lose your job and your boyfriend in a span of 2 days.
Things you can improve on: Um, maybe a more exciting plot? I dunno really
Additional notes: I started reading the sequel and wowza. Also, I rly want to be in a healthy married relationship like wut? You seem like such goalss
Final rating: 9/10
Author: MelissaStylesInStyle
Overall Story: The plot was so cool. Like it made me want to live abroad too :) I was super pleased with your grammar and spelling and you actually have decently lengthed chapters. Unlike legit almost everyone else on this site. The only flaw that I want to pick at is the way you made Niall seem like the victim in almost all the situations. It was something small but it made it seem like he was very delicate. Everything was beaut
My favorite things: Thankful for your proper spacing !! Remember kids, never drink or else you’ll get drunk and lose your job and your boyfriend in a span of 2 days.
Things you can improve on: Um, maybe a more exciting plot? I dunno really
Additional notes: I started reading the sequel and wowza. Also, I rly want to be in a healthy married relationship like wut? You seem like such goalss
Final rating: 9/10
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