Book Title: Beating Heart
Author: brianna.smith aka the holiest goddess on 1dfanfic.org
Overall Story: I thought it was actually rlly good. I did get confused when Julianne finds out what Harry actually is but then I reread it and I understood. Nothing on you :) It was also different from a lot of other fanfics. People always take a member from the band and a made up character and smush them together at the beginning and write about just their relationship but you do something so different and unique. You introduced Harry to Julianne so much later to the book, before even the reader knew exactly where Julianne is. And that was soo great!
My favorite things: The supernatural aspect was super cool
Things you can improve on: Maybe less flashbacks? I sometimes get lost and they’re sometimes irrelevant
Additional notes: if you got offended anyhow from this review, I’m sorry. I did enjoy it, your book is very well written but there were a few things that are just suggestions.
Final rating: 9/10

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