Book Title: Amber Alert
Author: LukeLover2317 btw I stan you
Overall Story: okay so to start off, I’ve already happened to have read Amber Alert before I started writing story reviews so just remember that I am your biggest fan :) Anyways, your writing, you can get right into a character’s mind and express their thoughts so well. Like in all of your fanfics, you have this thing where your character is talking about something so random and I’ll be like relateee. Anyways, that’s a good thing.
My favorite things: For once a fanfic that doesn’t involve Luke (or any of the 5sos member) falling in love. I lowkey am sick of all the romance fanfics so this was great
Things you can improve on: Maybe some more detail? But for real I kinda loved how much room it had for me to imagine what the rooms look like and stuff like that. So I guess detail isn’t that important for me.
Additional notes: if you ever have time, a spin off to Amber Alert would be super cool.
Final rating: 9/10

Notes

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