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Okay, here is the shit. I like your story. I like that it is a Louis fanfic. There is quite a bit of drama which is good. With all the times that Louis cheats on Annika, although it really pisses me off how Annika always forgives Louis and goes back to him so easily, you probably should have let her be mad at him for a little longer each time.

Also, i think Annika is a complete and utter crybaby. Literally, all the time she is crying and she cries in front of the boys which is something that not many girls would do so that part is kind of unrealistic.

I don't like the name Annika. I get that it is foreign but everytime i read it i kind of cringed (sorry if this is your name) The name Emma is a lot more simple. Which brings me to my next topic. Emma, who i utterly hate. She is always blabbing Annika's secrets to the guys and everyone. Plus, she NEVER takes Annika's side, always taking the boy's side AND on top of all that she is sometimes really bitchy to Annika.

My main issue was... WHEN A NEW PERSON SPEAKS YOU PUT IT ON A NEW LINE.
For example. "Hey guys" Annika said
"Hey Annie"
Otherwise it gets too confusing.

However, i think you have portrayed the characters clearly and i love Louis personality. The way he is such a player and all. I also love the playful banter between Louis and Annika when they first meet, the nicknames and all. It's cute

Overall, I think this is a really good story, there was a lot to judge on yet not many bad things to judge, only good. This seriously is a fantastic story, can’t wait to read the sequel!
~Sophalicious

DEAR ALL PEOPLE
I recommend this story if you like drama. It is a Louis fanfic by the way so if you like him then go check it out. I give this story a 6/10.

Notes

Don't be afraid to message me or comment below to ask me to review your stories. What's the worst that could happen? You get some feedback and new ideas? GREAT!
Love you all!