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Okay here is the truth, I like your story a lot. I like the whole drama at the beginning with Annika and Harry. Are they dating, are they not dating? It’s good. I have to tell you that after hearing the name Annika a few times, I like it. I think Milly is a total bitch and am glad she is out of it after a few chapters.

All the characters are a lot more mature and sensible, I am glad that they have grown up but at the same time I love their immature silly selves. I think that Macy is cute however I think that you have eliminated a lot of possibilities by bringing her into the story. If Niall and Emma didn’t have a daughter and they were just dating, then you had the option to create a lot of drama by making one of them cheat or making them break up but now you can’t really do that because they have a daughter so if they do break up things will just get really messy and annoying. Personally that’s what I think.

I like the whole drama of Annika being abused by her ex-boyfriend then Louis hits her and she goes to the trail. That was very dramatic however I feel like Annika forgave him too quickly considering what he did. If I were you I probably would have made her been mad at him for a little longer but that’s just me.

Same with when Louis left. He abandoned his one month old twins and fiancée then came back and I think that Annika forgave him too quickly. I think she should have taken it slower, given him small opportunities to prove that he is going to stay. Overall, I have to say that I don’t like it as much as the first one but it is still good.

Keep updating please! You have no problem with incorporating drama into your stories however I think you may need to extend it for a little longer if you know what I mean.
~Sophalicious


DEAR OTHER PEOPLE
This story is good however i am not going to recommend it because it is a sequel so if you wanna read this one then first you have to read Opposite's Attract which is fantastic by the way. I give this story a 7 1/2 /10

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