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I absolutely love your story The Arranged Wedding! I know I have said that I am not a Harry girl millions of times BUT in this story, I don’t mind. I think if it was a Liam or Niall or Zayn fanfic then it wouldn’t be as good. I love the drama, intensity and the reality of it all. I mean, if I were in Annabeth’s situation then I wouldn’t have a clue what to do just like she doesn’t. Her reactions, opinions and takes on life are very life like which makes me like the story even more.

For the first 6 or 7 chapters I was reading because…well…because I had to review it but after that I completely forgot about judging it and just read the story for my own pleasure, which I don’t do very often since I am a very judgemental person and like the critique stories whether the author has asked me to or not.

The grammar is good and the events are really well sequenced and easy to follow. I like Riden’s character. Angry, possessive, abusive, he has a strong personality and it is clear the type of person he is. I like that you incorporated such a character into your story. Only thing I would criticize is the whole Delilah situation, I don’t really get it.

I was kind of hoping Harry would come back to England with a girl to make Annabeth jealous or something but instead he came back with a toddler? I don’t know, I mean I get it…but at the same time I am wondering how Delilah is relevant, like, how does she have anything to do with Harry and Annabeth’s situation. I dunno. Overall, I really like this story and I am definitely going to keep reading it. Please keep updating!
~Sophalicious

DEAR ALL PEOPLE
This story is good! Legit, good! I would and will definitely recommend it. I give it an 7 1/2 /10. This is possibly one of my favourite stories that I have reviewed on this particular reviewing base thingy. It is good. Definitely check it out

Notes

Okay people
i wrote that rant yesterday
and today i recieved yet another hate message
Seriously STOP IT!
You ain't going to get the reaction you are looking for
I AM NOT GOING TO CHANGE MY REVIEW OR OPINION SO GIVE IT A REST!!!


Sorry, it is just really annoying me. Don't be afraid to send me your stories and i will happily review them and to the people whose reviews are late i am really sorry but you will get them soon.