Story Reviews

Overall Rating: 9/10

Aw! Such a cute story :) Loved it it made me smile it was just cute (I know I already said that)

Many things I liked about it

The relationship between Calum and Allison (did I spell that right?) quite honestly adorable
The storyline
The supporting characters
Your writing style
The flow of the story
& the structure and clear emotions portrayed in this story just great :)

Theres not much criticism I have to be perfectly honest, if the rest of the story is going to be this way then you rock! :)

Please dont ruin this cute little story with something bad happening I beg of you (okay maybe you can but it has to end happily ever after :p)

I really like Allison aswell a genuine, rrelatable and not too plastic (cliche and emotionless) characters :)

Thanks for asking me to review this :)

Jen x

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