Story Reviews

Because you only have five chapters up this review won't be as long as some of my others x

Overall rating 9/10

I like this story it isn't a conventional love story and its going at a great pace

Character development is really good and I love you style of writing, theres alot of suspense and horror as a reader as to what is going on :)

The start of this story has set a solid base for the rest of this story, which I think will be consistent and good, you can just tell you really know what your doing here

All spelling and punctuation looks good and I like your consistent structure

Im expecting great things from this story :) New subscriber!

Of course I recommend this story and would love to read more of it!

Thanks
Jen x

Notes

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Also could you all check out my new story Wishful Thinking?

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