Story Reviews

Overall Rating 8/10

Hmm not a Muke fan myself (sorry! ;p) but I did like the storyline probably one of the most original I have read on here if I'm honest

Your style of writing was great it was really intriguing actually I kind of just got sucked into the story like some special stories not his site where you can actually visualise everything happening almost as if you are watching from the sidelines (hope I dont sound too crazy)

You kind of ticked all the boxes for me, people who have read all my other reviews will know I am a complete paragraph control freak I need a story to be structured clearly and simply for me to be able to read a story, your structuring was really good :)

Punctuation, grammar and spelling was all perfect too :)

Character development I think Luke and Mikey were developed pretty well, not too sure about Ashton and Calum (your obviously not finished yet so I'll have to wait and see) but generally if they are meant to be main characters I want to see a bit more from all of the characters in an individual sense :)

Thats about all the criticisms I have to be honest :)

Nice storyline
Nice characters
Nice flow of words

Definitely recommend :)
Thanks!
Jen x

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