Story Reviews

Beautifully written!!

From the start I was such a goner for this story, it was perfect, I read the whole thing in one sitting and cannot wait to start on the sequel. I shipped Luke & Avery so much! I know alot of people use the whole bad guy good girl relationship concept, but you still had unique touch in the story.

I found Luke & Averys time together in the story so adorable and was so happy when he dumped Winter. I thought the whole band part & Avery singing so well was a great addition.

That ending though! Whyyy? So freaking sad, Avery forgives Luke for whatever happened with winter leaves this heartbreaking voicemail and boards her plane to America thinking he doesnt care :( he does! He was just too late!

Spelling & structure were perfect! I would definitely reccomend! Overall rating: 9/10

Well Im off to read a sequel! Much love x Jen

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