Story Reviews

Really original story!

You dont read much stories about interior designers on here do you? So I really liked the overall concept, I also love the name Zemorah and the fact th she isnt white was nice too, so few fanfics have p.o.c as main character pictures so hooray for you!

I liked Zemorah as a character, an independent & relatable woman :) The one point I would make is that its slightly unrealistic that each member of 5sos and of the interior design ladies would find their matches, but I can forgive you for that as this is fiction!

I liked the twist with the baby and Zemorahs issues becasuse they provided the drama! I also liked how Luke kept telling Zemorah he loved her and she replied ok andd how that switched at the end, that was cute :) Spelling & structure all good, I would reccomend :)

Overall rating:7/10

Much love x

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