Story Reviews

Youve only done two chapters so its a short one;)

Okay so even though theres only two chapters up I can tell its going to be a good one, I loved the first chapter with all the mystery and comparisons and the introduction of Lucinda and Louis. I absolutely loved your cover, it was simply gorgeous.

Chapter two was intriguing, a funeral always a good way to start ;) Louis seems to blame himself for a death which raises many more questions, I hope will be answered, you nailed youre writing style. All spelling, structure and grammar was great.

I need more though! Youve got me hooked :) Please do leave me a comment when you have a few more chapters and I will be happy to review again!

I would reccomend (just needs more content!)

Overall rating: 7/10

Love Jen xx

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Btw can we please vote and rate xx If I have already reviewed tell me your thoughts, if not leave me a comment and I will add you to the list