Story Reviews

PLEASE TELL ME THERE IS GOING TO BE A SEQUEL!

So, I read this one in a day, I literally could not stop. It was a rollercoaster of emotions: sad, angry, happy and I hated Lisa (yes, I hated on a fictional character go read the story to see what I mean) As Raven put it "Laven/Ruke is way better as a ship name than Lusa"

Raven and Luke were adorable, and the other guys all had unique characters and made me laugh, alot. But it wasnt all laughter for me, Ravens father who was an all around great guy judging from her flashbacks dies at the start, but because of this and the dreaded Lusa thing Raven is depressed, suicidal starts cutting, she is haunted by dreams of her father, luckily has Luke her "sunshine" to help her through tough times! (dont we all wish we had a Luke??)

Okay so storyline was great, as was structure I did pick up on a few minor spelling mistakes one which made me laugh when Raven said Luke could be a 'very charming cereal killer' I think you meant serial!

Things to work on:
A sequel ;) you cant just leave us hanging now michael and calum are dating and laven are execting a baby!

The whole amnesia thing- yes it aded some drama, but not hat much and she remembered everything

Also the Calum kissing Raven thing?! It just happened, I wanted a Raven& Calum moment explaining why it happened!

I still loved it and would 100% reccomend!

Overall rating: 9/10

Love, Jen xxx

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