Story Reviews

I CANT FORGIVE YOU FOR THIS:'(

When I started reading this story I thought it was just one of those cute cliche "I wish my best friend would love me back" type storylines. But after reading chapter 2 I saw you had other ideas when Sams problems and Calums flaws became evident, but thats what made the story great, humans arent perfect, so why should the characters we write be any different?

Also love the the mentions of the fault in our stars and thirteen reasons why as I love those books alot. :)

Two critisisms I do have are: Calums seemingly low intelligence and him being so slow to realise its Sams diary, it seems glaringly obvious, a girl who cuts and has a best who isnt there for her with obvious nicknames (e.g Michele for Michael) I know its part of the whole build up to him finding out but it went on for quite some time

Next was the other guys, what roles did Luke and Ashton honestly have, except for being the two clever quiet guys and Sams friends.

UP until the end I would have given you a 7/10 for an enjoyable and unique read, spelling was all great as was structure and I liked that Mali had a role

The ending though! Just when I thought everyrhi was great, yay they are finally togethery, you killed them off! Two characters whos futures I was emotionally invested in how could you?! I actually shed a tear or two.

The writing for the last chaper and epilouge was exceptional! I was left feeling satisfied but sad

I would reccomend (just make sure you have tissues read the end)

Overall rating 9/10

Love Jen xx

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