Story Reviews

HAPPY NEW MY LOVLIES!

I have mixed feelings about this story, im not sure if it is amazingly confusing or just plain confusing :)

I really admire youre writing style regardless yocaptured the inner conversations and turmoil of your charactespectacularly, though sometimes keeping up withe the storyline had me scratching my head a bit.

The whole concept is definitely unique and shows an imaginative mind, so you get points for that aswell as making sure there is enough suspense the reader carries on reading :)

The whole backstory with Scarlet and Luke is solid, but I have to say I dont really the whole parent story

Youre structure, spelling and grammar were all flawless

I know you wrote that you were planning on doing a sequel, if so I would like the sequel to be more dirct, of course I get why you want to create suspense, tension and make your readers question what is going on, butheres a fine line between this and downright confusion!
I would reccomend this as it is beautifully written x

Overall rating: 7/10
Love
Jen x

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