Story Reviews
Its 9.24 Review
Everyone go read it...NOW!
Beautifully written, I just cant fault it, I dont wanna give away much spoilers ;)
The whole concept of a missing friend in therapy and a heart torn two ways was so damn good, you have some great great description, and I like that its multiple povs, basically i like everything, the characters, storyline and build up!
Structure, really good as was your spelling and grammar!
OVERALL:9/10
Im a fan, definitely reccomend keep it up!
xx Jen
Can you do one for my story "The Arranged Wedding"? Thanks love!!!
2/5/17