Story Reviews

This was a short one,so I did it first :) Hoping to upload alot today, maybe around five reviews:)

Onto the story, which intrigues me, a death has obviously occured making the narrator depressd for three yes and I would like to know more about 'Ed'

Your decription is reallu great, ou go in a lot of detail which I really like, even though you only have two chapters up the two chapters are amazing.

Your structure is just perfect, no chunky paragraphs but organised for suspense and easy reading :) Spelling and grammar all excellent, your vocab is really good

What I hope to see in your boook:
More great character development
A clear backstory
and maybe multiple povs?
I would definitly reccomend :)
Oerall rating: 8/10

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