Story Reviews

Just wanted to start off by saying what I usually say when a story is short, i won't be able to review alot :)

Also to everyone who has been waiting for there reviews I AM SO SORRY that I havent been on here in about a month, life just got in the way I suppose i promise I will try to review every one of your stories more sooner than later :) Thanks for understanding ok so onto the review...

Overall rating: 8/10

I like the story the concept seems concrete, the character building I have seen so far is almost immaculate and I think it will be really great once you've managed to squeeze a few more chapters in, once you have done this leave me a comment and I can review it taking into account new chapters ;)

You have a great style of writing, there were no punctuation, grammar or structural issues, I like Liz's point of view but I think the story would benefit from multiple points of view.

A really promising start, I of course recommend it and would love to read more!

Thanks everyone!

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