Story Reviews

Again won't be as long because theres only two chapters up x :)

Overall Rating: 8/10

'As far as he was concerned, there wasn’t any being weaker than a human.'
'The lady knew the score, he'd stake his pack's reputation on that fact. She knew he wasn't human. Probably knew exactly what he was.'

A mysterious, intriguing kind of read not the usual on these sites but I liked it :) Good start of the story good kind of direction

Structure was excellent
Spelling, punctuation and grammar all ticked the boxes

Only other thing to say is its a shame theres not more up, if you like comment below when you have at least five chapters up I think I can help you a bit more then I feel a bit useless to you right now :)

Much love
Jen xx

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