Story Reviews

IM IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY!

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It needed capitals for me to highlight my love. I just love, love and love it when I'm feeling really tired all set to go to sleep but then feel guilty about not reviewing so start to read someones story... and can't stop! In case you didn't realise that happened now because this story is beautiful

Overall rating: 10/10

So from the first chapter I was gripped, your writing style really pulled me in, its just so unique, it didn't seem like your average cliche love story. It just gets better from there, I love Monroe as I character she is everything I want from in a character relatable, heartfelt and just so alive, her life doesn't just seem like a story it seems like your living there with her!

"A four letter word. A word that means dismay, trepidation, and dread. Your afraid of doing what the inner parts of your heart is screaming for you to do. You need to break out of your comfort zone which is built upon fear. Fear holds people back. Either the fear of losing or gaining."

I honestly dont know how you did it, it seems so professional and refined! I obviously can't stand Fleur as a character and I am totally rooting for Luke and Monroe! The backstory and everything else is just too cute!

Spelling and grammar all great, one structural point, my only negative point is the chunky paragraphs it makes easier reading if the paragraphs are split into smaller, more manageable chunks (at least for me) but thats just my opinion, apart from that flawless!

So sorry I was late getting back to you! I definitely recommend this (you have a new subscriber by the way)

Thanks and love you all xx

Jen

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