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I NEED MY SISTERS TO HELP ME OUT

Summary

Just go over my story and comment anything, I am 100% open to criticism, but I would also like to know how you liked the plot. And if it portrayed the American dream. PLEASE let me know, I'm freaking out that my teacher wont like it.


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@megan lueaders

Okay what do you need help with? :)

Leila Judeh Leila Judeh
1/22/15

@Leila Judeh

sure

megan lueaders megan lueaders
1/22/15

@megan lueaders

Huh.? Do you need help with something? If you do I can help :)

Leila Judeh Leila Judeh
1/22/15

my sis ned to help me out really

megan lueaders megan lueaders
1/22/15

@ak_sings

Really? Okay let me do it again

Leila Judeh Leila Judeh
1/21/15
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