I NEED MY SISTERS TO HELP ME OUT - Comments

@megan lueaders

Okay what do you need help with? :)

@Leila Judeh

sure

@megan lueaders

Huh.? Do you need help with something? If you do I can help :)

my sis ned to help me out really

@ak_sings

Really? Okay let me do it again

@Leila Judeh
I haven't been added.....

@ak_sings
YAY! THANK YOU!! I was so worried my teacher wouldn't like it, did you understand what the American dream was through the story?
Yes, I'll add you right now.

You are so welcome

So, will I be able to edit, revise, whatever you want to call it?

The plot is great!!! Good job!!! The beginning instantly drew me in. The first sentence just makes the reader want to read more and to continue to see where Daniel is going. This story is great!!! Good job!!!

@Malina Tomlinson

Thakns Nina!



@ak_sings

And okay Ak, but what did you think about the plot? I am also in Honors English and Alebra 2 but since you are a freshman I have a higher class on the other ones. I took those classes last year though! But anyway, the plot?

Hey, can you make me the author, so I can just make some revisions? I am in Honors English and AP World History, and Honors Biology, and Honors Algebra 2. Yes Algebra 2. I am a freshman. I think that I know what to do. I'll just make a few punctuation, spelling, grammar, etc. changes, then it'll be good to go. Only if you make me one of the authors. I PROMISE I WON'T CHANGE THE TOPIC OR ANYTHING!!!!!!! YOU CAN TRUST ME!!!!!!!!

I LOVE IT ALOT