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Chapter 4

We're standing at the train station, our trains sure in ten minutes.
'five hotties 3oclock' Jessie whispers to me.
i look where she's indicating and there was five boys coming our way and they were all extremely hot.
One of the boys with blond hair looked up and made eye contact with me,he smiles, the cutiest smile I have ever seen, I smile back and sit back in my seat and wait till they walk bye.
while I was looking at them Jessie had started fixing her hair, putting on more Lip gloss and putting 2 pieces of gum in her mouth.
'you want?' She askes.
'please' I take the gum and pop it into my mouth just before the boys walk bye.

'Heya' a voice says in the seat beside me.
I turn around to see one of the boys with brown hair and a really sassy smile staring at me.....
'uhhhh hi' I answer,
what's your names?'
'I might ask u the same question?' I reply,
beside me I here Jessie gasp, I never, EVER talk to boys my own age it's just not really my thing and I'm definitely not sassy but something about this boy, like his pressance made me feel...well nice? I don't eveen know myself.
'well im Louis, the one sitting next to me says,
'this is Harry,Liam,Zayn and Niall' he points to the boy that had blonde hair and he does his amazingly cute smile and....
wait a second,I can smell something, I smelled it before but I thought it was their aftershave, but it's not...
it smells like, like, oh fuck like death....
'well me and my friend here better be off so bye' I say trying to sound as causel as I can.
'But' jessie protests..' We are going to miss our bus, come on'
I say.
'wait, I thought we were taking the..' This time of of the boys cuts her off (Harry I think)
'well What are u doing I a train station if u are taking the bus?'
'we changed our minds' I reply and pull Jessie out of her seat and walk as quickly as I can dragging her beind me, not daring to stop and look behind to see if they were following us.


'What was the all about' Jessie askes when we had final say down in our seats on the bus.
luckely the boys had not followed us.
'well i tbought we should take the bus instead' I say swiftly.
'but u wear acting so weird like you wear anxious about them, but you always seem to be anxious around boys soooo'
'ye i was anxious,now just leave it out'
'0k' Jessie replys and she turns away.
We don't talk too we reach blanchardstown.





Notes

Hey guys hope u like it so far!!
what do u think should happen next??? Xx
IMPORTAND: sorry guys when I was writing chapter 5 it froze and only saved half of it and now it won't let me edit it so sorry it's so short !!! X

Comments

Hey I like the story a lot so far but could you make the chapters longer please? And update!

CherryCoke23 CherryCoke23
6/8/15

@Savanna and Niall
Thanks it's my first story and I no it's not great I'm just not sure how to write this type of story so I though I'd give it a go..do u have any tips?? X

Lilly44223 Lilly44223
11/26/14

Lilly. I'm gicing my honest opinion. I love the story's but. It needs lots of work for it to get views. Yes I love these stories but they way you right these I wouldn't read it. Message me if you'd like some help. I voted and subbed for Ya. Continue though!