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Chapter 2
Avas P.O.V
It's Friday.im home from school and it late.i had detention for something I didn't do (I hate Laila (Blaims me all the time) and I'm starving
I need to hunt.
i go out the frount door and run to the city(super speed) I get there is less the 2 minutes.i can smell blood. I only drink drunkies people who known would miss in this world,I feel bad but you get use to it.. I hear scuffling foot steps and smell fresh blood.
ohhh how good that smell is it makes me want to kill,I can feel my eyes turning red
then im running down a ally and pinning a man to the wall. He stunk like sweat and alcohol.."well hello girly"he says his voice slurring.. Ugggh I sigh and snap his neck
I no that sounds bad but for him it hurts less(it being quick) because other wise he would die a slow deth of me sucking his blood.and then for me I'm smaller then him so I can reach him if he's on the ground...
Oh my god BLOOD that's all I can think about I have drunken him dry but I can't stop I here a sound, i jump up and spin around but it's only and ally cat.
but thank good for ally cats though other wise I mightend have been able to stop and then..... Never mind.
and get up and make a big slash across his stomach(it makes it look like a animal attack) and run home......
Notes
Hi guys it Lilly hope u like my story!! What do u think(comment)??? Thanks byeee x
Hey I like the story a lot so far but could you make the chapters longer please? And update!
6/8/15