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I thought this would work

Chapter 1

Ava's P.O.V

hey, I'm Ava I'm 13 and let's just say I'm not ur avarage everyday 13 year old girl. I talk like one, I dress like one and I pretty much look like one but there is one thing that stands out from the rest.
I'm a Vampire.
im a rare breed of vampire but still one all the same. You have proberly heard that once you bitten you don't grow old u stay the same age well not me,I was bitten by a Shawen vampire (which is quite luckey for me since I was bitten so young) so yeh basically that means you can grow as old as u want but when u want to stop growing you drink this drink (it's not that hard to find) and I will stop growing forever but besides that there is no other difference,I'm still growing at the same rate as my friends(who are not vamps) so yeah I have blue eyes(unless I'm hunting then there red) blond hair. I live in dublin,Ireland. I go to school (cause I have to) and this is my life.....

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Comments

Hey I like the story a lot so far but could you make the chapters longer please? And update!

CherryCoke23
6/8/15

@Savanna and Niall
Thanks it's my first story and I no it's not great I'm just not sure how to write this type of story so I though I'd give it a go..do u have any tips?? X

Lilly44223
11/26/14

Lilly. I'm gicing my honest opinion. I love the story's but. It needs lots of work for it to get views. Yes I love these stories but they way you right these I wouldn't read it. Message me if you'd like some help. I voted and subbed for Ya. Continue though!