Everything Fanfiction. I DON'T DO 5SOS

So Beth, I've seen a few of your stories before. You have great ideas, I just don't think you do your planning enough. A story has to be planned before you start it; you have to know what you want to do with the story and where you want it to go. You also have to plan EVERY chapter you write. After you wrote it, read through it and check for any mistakes, also, do a check for your writing.
Like I said; you have great story ideas. I just feel like when you write, you write to finish the chapter and to post it, that's very wrong. You should write about EVERYTHING when you write a story. Think about a movie; you don't watch a movie where everything is black and the only thing you see is the people and you hear their conversation. What I mean by that, is when you write, tell your readers about everything around your character, everything they see and hear, write about their thoughts on objects if you must. I don't always do that myself, but that might help you.
Also, I noticed how you wrote that Tarah really likes Zayn and that they are a cute couple but he only asked Tarah to be his girlfriend later that night, that doesn't seem right....
I like how you use yourself as a character in stories by the way, not everyone does that :)


Please take my advice and work on it xx

If anyone wants to know what the book is about;
A girl is in high school, she likes her French teacher; the lovely HARRY STYLES <3<3<3 maybe he likes her too

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