Your info will not be visible on the site. After logging in for the first time you'll be able to choose your display name.
Starting you off with a ten because your story is new.
I like your cover image :)
Maybe write a bit more in your summary. If you need ideas, try something like telling your readers how they found her on YT or tell them about her character. -1
Check your writing and grammar, I've noticed a few mistakes. -3
Your readers doesn't know a thing about your characters (chloe and amber) -1
5
@Telichia DLR
Thank you soo much doll! I appreciate it! I'm glad you enjoyed it. The sequel is up now if you're interested in reading it :) Your review is much appreciated love. Thanks again muah and merry late Christmas, hope you got what you wanted :)
Hi, uhm earlier on you did a review on my story Cross Country, I was actually wondering if you could possibly read it again since it's completed and also it's been tweaked a little. It would mean a lot if you could! No rush, it's Christmas and you need to enjoy it! Have a good Christmas doll
Hi!
I was wondering if you could please do a review on my Fanfiction The Night It All Went Down?
There's a few mistakes, I know, as I write it on my iPad and sometimes it autocorrects or I hit a wrong letter- when I edit it, since I'm not the most observant person in the world, they don't always get picked up!
Thank you :)
2/14/15