Reviews! :D

Hey @Raylee! I have just concluded reading your story 'The Hitchhiker' and, um, just, wow. I seriously am very speechless. It was phenomenal. I can tell you've put a lot of thought and work into it. Even though it is such an amazing story, you asked me to review it, so I'll give you some VERY minor feedback ;)
1. Intimate scenes: don't be afraid to let Tyra and Harry (or other couples in your story) have some small intimate scenes, it really gives lots of confidence for readers and this relationship.
2. Don't be afraid to make Tyra a strong person - I feel like she's a little weak, and maybe a TINY BIT of a girly girl.; but you also do NOT want to make her into a complete tom boy. It's kind of a balance thing ;)
3. I like how you showed how much Harry and Tyra grew closer together, and not like making out by the second chapter.
4. I absolutely L-O-V-E their background stories - it's absolutely FABULOUS and I wouldn't change a thing on that!

I really don't have a lot to critique on. (I'm SOOOOOOOO sorry about that hun!) The reason is because this story is just SOOOOO great already!



So, here are the stories I recommend you read:
Visiting Hours - WARNING! HIGHLY EMOTIONAL!
Lost
Good Meets Bad

This story is REALLY REALLY good! Keep up the FANTASTIC work!

PS: I was really surprised when you asked me to review your story because you have SOOOOO many views, subscribers, comments etc.

Have a superb day lovely!

X, Chels

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