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Geetings @Sarah_Tran!!!! I have just finished reading your story you have just asked me to read, and let me just say. Bravo. It was very, very good, and I truly did enjoy it very much. There's literally only like 2 things I would like to critique on, because that's how good it was!

1. Pick up the pace a little -you don't want to wait too long to reveal something, or else readers might get bored.
2. I say this to like EVERYONE, but it REALLY REALLY, helps people get a feel for the characters. Try to add costumes-trust me, it REALLY adds a LOT to the story. (The procedure is on my first review (chapter 2))
3. Maybe give her some girlfriends. I love the whole realtionship with Lucas, but I feel like she needs to have some girlfriends that understand girly things.
4. Don't be afraid to really put out there what you want to -if you're worried about the readers not liking something, don't worry about what they like -it's YOUR story, have fun with it!

I really want you to read this story:
Beautiful Monster -Your story REALLY reminds me of it, (which is why I LOVE your story so much) and this is my FAVORITE fanfic I've ever read!

This story is really REALLY good, and I really feel sort of like I'm right there with Rose; it really is truly good.

I hope this was helpful lovely!

PS: You really didn't need this story to be reviewed ;)

X, Chels

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