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"Cambridge" Review
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“Cambridge”
Grade: 4
The good things:
-Plot. Very interesting and intriguing.
-The personality of the characters; they were really funny!
Things to work on:
-The format in which you write your chapters was really annoying-both ways.
There were chapters.
Where legit.
It felt like after every sentence.
You pressed the enter button.
It’s annoying.
And I know you’re probably like “But this is written like that”. Well that’s because I’m making a list and a story shouldn’t be like that bro. Andthentherewerechapterswhereitfeltlikeyoudidn’thitthespacebaranditgavemeaheadache.
-Although I like the humorous personalities of the characters I feel like they don’t have any emotion.
Would I recommend this story to someone else?: Probably not, Sorry :/
“Cambridge”
Grade: 4
The good things:
-Plot. Very interesting and intriguing.
-The personality of the characters; they were really funny!
Things to work on:
-The format in which you write your chapters was really annoying-both ways.
There were chapters.
Where legit.
It felt like after every sentence.
You pressed the enter button.
It’s annoying.
And I know you’re probably like “But this is written like that”. Well that’s because I’m making a list and a story shouldn’t be like that bro. Andthentherewerechapterswhereitfeltlikeyoudidn’thitthespacebaranditgavemeaheadache.
-Although I like the humorous personalities of the characters I feel like they don’t have any emotion.
Would I recommend this story to someone else?: Probably not, Sorry :/
Notes
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