Login with:

Facebook

Twitter

Tumblr

Google

Yahoo

Aol.

Mibba

Your info will not be visible on the site. After logging in for the first time you'll be able to choose your display name.

Story Reviews

"THE DEATH OF ME" Review

raylee

"THE DEATH OF ME"

Grade: 6.5

The good things:

-The story plot is amazing! It’s different and interesting.
-I love Harry’s personality
-It makes me want to keep reading.

Things to work on:
-The summary was pretty disappointing. A lot of people look for a good summary to decide if they want to read the story and tbh if it wasn’t for this review I wouldn’t have read the first chapter. That really lowered your grade.
-The first chapter wasn’t too great either, but the other chapters made up for it.

Would I recommend this story to someone else?:
Once you fix the summary :)

Notes

Hope you're satisfied!

Follow me on wattpad:

• Niall_twerk_for_me

Comments

omg my story is the first on the list ahhhh :3

Perla1D Perla1D
1/7/15

@JordynHoran
Cool Thanks

@BEEbeautiful
I'll remove it when I get the chance :)

JordynHoran JordynHoran
1/3/15

@PUNK_CALUM
wow thanks for asking for someone to review my story I was actually looking for one and I saw my name at the bottom of the list and was like woah

but your name is attached and it looks like your a coauthor and it kinda bugs me don't mean to sound rude tho

Can u review a story called save me by @BEEbeautiful